A 'Before' and 'After'
example from a courier company.
THE ORIGINAL COPY EXACTLY AS WRITTEN BY THE CLIENT:
Welcome to Wildfire couriers, your answer to improving the delivery of
your business.
Our aim is to be Bath and the surrounding areas number one couriers. We can only do this by giving you and your business a competitive edge and real value for money with great service, great prices and great results.
On top of all this, we are a local company that is a bit special… we are backed up by a seamless, nationalwide and worldwide network that’s means we can pick up from anywhere – including pick ups for you back to you, with seamless service, paperwork and the best service.
So whether you are looking for a same day, next day, national or international solution we will always look to be competitive and give you the best service we possible can.
To help you, and in doing so reach our aim of being number one, we make sure our team is of the highest calibre, using the latest technology and make everything hassle free for you…
- As late as 8pm pick ups and still next day in the UK
- We do Same Day, Next Day… Worldwide
- For your letters, tender documents, parcels and even pallet loads
- To make it more cost effective for you we can offer before 10am or before noon deliveries
- Prices from just £8.95 plus vat include full track and trace on the internet
- We guarantee satisfaction
THE RE-WRITTEN VERSION:
Welcome to Wildfire Courier Services, the solution to improved delivery for your business.
Our aim…
Our aim is to be the number one courier for Bath and the surrounding area. We do this by helping to give your business a competitive edge - and real value for money - with great service, great prices and great results.
What makes us better?
We may be a friendly local company, but we are backed up by a seamless national and worldwide network. This means we can pick up from anywhere – including items to be delivered back to you – quickly, professionally and efficiently.
Our experienced and helpful team are here to help you - and to help us reach our aim of being number one. And our use of the latest technologies ensures your deliveries are hassle-free from start to finish.
So whether you are looking for a same day, next day, national or international solution, we aim to be competitive and offer the best possible service.
- Late collections up to 8pm - and can still deliver Next Day in the UK
- Same Day, Next Day - Worldwide
- Letters, tender documents, parcels - even pallet loads
- Pre-10am or Before Noon deliveries – giving you cost-effective flexibility
- Prices from just £8.95+vat including full internet track and trace